"Editing Insight" by Alex Ward
Overall I felt that Alex's paper was very well written. His opening paragraph laid the topical groundwork for the entire paper, followed by a brief description of the two speakers that we had in class. His following paragraphs were based around the teachings of our two speakers. Finally, he wrote a personal conclusion of what he has learned.
Other than some grammatical corrections and a few wording choices there were not many changes made. Because he followed step by step instructions from our speakers in framing his paper, the entire thing flowed very well.
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